Sunday 21 September 2008

Litany

Hello all,

Recently I entered an online poetry 'form' competition, a bit of fun, where everyone had to write a Litany, which is a poem, almost like a prayer, where the first word or first few words are repeated on every line. Anyway, I WON!!! And as winner I have the pleasure of selecting the next form and judging the competition. If anyone is interested the website is www.online-literature.com/forums and it's a nice site with a reading section, a writing section, and a general section, and they have blogs too!

Anyway, here is the poem:

Swallow

I swallow the kiss of a secret lover.
I swallow the hand reaching out for another.
I swallow the joy from a toddler’s smile.
I swallow the watch with the broken dial.
I swallow the dreams of a newlywed bride.
I swallow the memories from a dying man’s eyes.
I swallow the hope of a new generation.
I swallow the pause in a long conversation.
I swallow the what, the how, and the why.
I swallow the stars from a crisp autumn sky.
I swallow the essence of a good man’s soul.

I swallow the Earth then spit it out again, whole.

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

Bii, this is lovely.

Although it's fair to say that I don't really "get" poetry (primarily because I can never think of anything that rhymes with Dalek), I can appreciate a thing of beauty when I see it (e.g. a Wilson Palacios through-ball).

That's what this is, a thing of beauty

Nicky J Poole said...
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Nicky J Poole said...

Rather spiffing. Well done!

CADWC Secretary said...

Great stuff B....
.....and you told me that you don't really enter competitions. Just being modest ??? H

CADWC Secretary said...

hmmm, rhymes with 'Dalek'?

er.....lek.....trek.....er...
.......ummmm......oh fek !!!!

Nicky J Poole said...

For rhymses with 'dalek,' try http://www.rhymer.com/RhymingDictionary/garlic.html

CADWC Secretary said...

ooooh good website. I feel a poem coming on.....

Anonymous said...

Dalek

Star Trek

It's easy when you put your mind to it!

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